Ashley Olsen by joontje
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Hi all, I worked excactly 6 hours on this outfit, so i hope u enjoy it. I fixed one bug in her chest. Happy Olsen Time :D Credits goes to Trinity for the head.
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Well, I think this one is the best of all your outfits, I think, you're getting better ;) Now the outfit: ;) First I looked at it in StrPix and I saw, that there were some meshes, you didn't credit: The hands are Silent Viper's, The guns are MrNiceGuy's (I love them :P) and the shoes are from Xavier2004 Doesn't matter. The textures could have been a little better, but they were okay. The chestmesh looked a little strange, I think the form could have been better. But it was okay. The face-textures could have need some more work, too, she squinted :D It was quite original, cause there was never one like this before, so I give a 10. The quality was okay, but it's "only" an eight cause of some wrong rotated textures. Useability is a 7, it can be used in city levels or home levels. Alltogether I have to say: Nice work and keep it on :)
(07 Oct 2004 18:05)
This is one of your best outfits, this and Blue AOD. Original: This is the first of The Olsen twins, so this is very original for that. Quality: The chest mesh needed work and some textures were oddly placed and needed to be rotated. The white part of her shirt was placed at the top of her head behind the bangs, and the lips could have been rotated better. Also a note for the texture on the head mesh (I think I've seen it before :p ) you need to add a new texture for the middle of the nose, otherwise it'll look strange. Useable: It can be used like a Young Lara outfit maybe, or a Olsen twins level (Where's Mary Kate?). Custom textures: The shirt texture was really nice, but I thibk it would have looked better without the white part. The jeans were cool! The hair texture was ok, but it needed to be rotated. And her eyes are really pretty, but they are very small. Custom meshes: The chest mesh was, unfortunetly, not very good. It was oldly shaped and her backpack was smaller then her hand. Even though that was odd, the other meshes you selected to add to your outfit (Mostly made by other people) were good. Good but needs some work. You're getting there, someday I'm sure you'll have an outfit up in the top ten, maybe. :) [i]Edited by Trinity[/i]
(10 Oct 2004 20:37)
good outfit really original, since I´ve never seen an outfit like this one unfortunally it has some problems, like some textures that arent well rotated it can be used in casual levels. But if u dont have much about Ashley Olsen (like me) its a bit hard to put it in a level. the textures are great, but some like the hair ones arent well rotated the meshes are fine, some could be better like the chest, but they are good anyway keep that good job, your outfits are getting better!
(14 Oct 2004 03:04)
originality 10: it's the first Olsen girl here. quality 8: the textures were bad resized wich had the effect, that they have now dark stripes. The mesh created by you was deformed, her chest looks really strange. usability 8: I think movie characters are less usable than characters from other games, so I gave a 8. textures 7: I mentioned the dark stripes and her eyes look strange, too. meshes 7: the chest (the only mesh by yourself) had a very strange shape.
(15 Oct 2004 17:44)
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Well, I think this one is the best of all your outfits, I think, you're getting better ;) Now the outfit: ;) First I looked at it in StrPix and I saw, that there were some meshes, you didn't credit: The hands are Silent Viper's, The guns are MrNiceGuy's (I love them :P) and the shoes are from Xavier2004 Doesn't matter. The textures could have been a little better, but they were okay. The chestmesh looked a little strange, I think the form could have been better. But it was okay. The face-textures could have need some more work, too, she squinted :D It was quite original, cause there was never one like this before, so I give a 10. The quality was okay, but it's "only" an eight cause of some wrong rotated textures. Useability is a 7, it can be used in city levels or home levels. Alltogether I have to say: Nice work and keep it on :)
(07 Oct 2004 18:05)
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Needs some work, but I'll be nice :)
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This is one of your best outfits, this and Blue AOD. Original: This is the first of The Olsen twins, so this is very original for that. Quality: The chest mesh needed work and some textures were oddly placed and needed to be rotated. The white part of her shirt was placed at the top of her head behind the bangs, and the lips could have been rotated better. Also a note for the texture on the head mesh (I think I've seen it before :p ) you need to add a new texture for the middle of the nose, otherwise it'll look strange. Useable: It can be used like a Young Lara outfit maybe, or a Olsen twins level (Where's Mary Kate?). Custom textures: The shirt texture was really nice, but I thibk it would have looked better without the white part. The jeans were cool! The hair texture was ok, but it needed to be rotated. And her eyes are really pretty, but they are very small. Custom meshes: The chest mesh was, unfortunetly, not very good. It was oldly shaped and her backpack was smaller then her hand. Even though that was odd, the other meshes you selected to add to your outfit (Mostly made by other people) were good. Good but needs some work. You're getting there, someday I'm sure you'll have an outfit up in the top ten, maybe. :) [i]Edited by Trinity[/i]
(10 Oct 2004 20:37)
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good outfit really original, since I´ve never seen an outfit like this one unfortunally it has some problems, like some textures that arent well rotated it can be used in casual levels. But if u dont have much about Ashley Olsen (like me) its a bit hard to put it in a level. the textures are great, but some like the hair ones arent well rotated the meshes are fine, some could be better like the chest, but they are good anyway keep that good job, your outfits are getting better!
(14 Oct 2004 03:04)
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originality 10: it's the first Olsen girl here. quality 8: the textures were bad resized wich had the effect, that they have now dark stripes. The mesh created by you was deformed, her chest looks really strange. usability 8: I think movie characters are less usable than characters from other games, so I gave a 8. textures 7: I mentioned the dark stripes and her eyes look strange, too. meshes 7: the chest (the only mesh by yourself) had a very strange shape.
(15 Oct 2004 17:44)
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