A party version 2.0 by joontje
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I created a new Party outfit (in 1 day). I created a new gun and shard that she holds. Angel_of_darkness helped me with the gun.
Outfits
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Summer / Seasons
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Hm, the chest looked very strange again. :( Sorry, but I don't know, why you put in a shard?! The first gun looked strange, too. The textures were no so good, sorry. Try to make better. The rest was okay, but next time, make something new....
(30 Jul 2004 12:33)
Well I know you're starting out with the outfit making thing, and I don't try to be mean and all. But, you don't have to make a Vr2 for every outfit. I liked the first version better and the only big thing I saw that was diffrent was now she shows more skin. and I did'nt terribly like the one texture you used for the outfit. I'm trying to be honest in what I see, and people do like your outfit and it does capture a sence of inocence. The shade of color was a nice choice and pink-ish camo is a good idea, maybe next time a black tank top and pink camo shorts or something. Just so the textures arn't over used. The idea for this outfit was a good one, and original, just needs a little tiny bit of work. But for the way it is, it still looks great! Good job, I'm glad you keep going! :D [i]Edited by Trinity[/i]
(03 Aug 2004 04:21)
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Hm, the chest looked very strange again. :( Sorry, but I don't know, why you put in a shard?! The first gun looked strange, too. The textures were no so good, sorry. Try to make better. The rest was okay, but next time, make something new....
(30 Jul 2004 12:33)
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Well I know you're starting out with the outfit making thing, and I don't try to be mean and all. But, you don't have to make a Vr2 for every outfit. I liked the first version better and the only big thing I saw that was diffrent was now she shows more skin. and I did'nt terribly like the one texture you used for the outfit. I'm trying to be honest in what I see, and people do like your outfit and it does capture a sence of inocence. The shade of color was a nice choice and pink-ish camo is a good idea, maybe next time a black tank top and pink camo shorts or something. Just so the textures arn't over used. The idea for this outfit was a good one, and original, just needs a little tiny bit of work. But for the way it is, it still looks great! Good job, I'm glad you keep going! :D [i]Edited by Trinity[/i]
(03 Aug 2004 04:21)
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